Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 10 Ch. 4 - The Frontier Swine Idolizes The Fairy Princess

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Honestly, I feel like this was the worst one so far, not because of the premise, but because of its execution and the... creepiness of the male lead. I really was searching for a better term for it, but something about his behaviour just grosses me out, no matter his appearance at any of the story's stages. He never really thinks of his fiancée as a full-fledged human with thoughts and flaws; the oshi stanning, under the breath muttering, creepy obsession before the story starts, just, ugh. I've read other stories of fans being isekaied and getting into a romance with their favorite character, so that's not quite the issue, it's just, he's so so weird and creepy about it. Reminds me of the worst of 2000's mouth-breathing otakus stereotypes in the worst of ways, and it feels like this is a wish-fulfillment story for them as opposed to the girls/women this anthology typically targets.
 
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Everyone's talking about the rushed ending, while I'm over here wondering how to get his hairstyle lol dude has it going
 
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The Build up is pretty good
The ending? Too Forced tbh
This could get atleast 7 or 8, but the ending ruined it so hard
 
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The villainess part just sort of speed ran the first couple of pages, then it was just a more classic misunderstanding conventionally unattractive love interest gets understood. (Also becomes conventionally attractive) I don't really mind it but maybe more of the Piggy Duke over a long period of time would work better for me, where only in the final arc does he reach that point. This could have legs if they dialed up her nature to be self-centered/villainess as a foil to his kind nature. Appreciate the TLs all the same.
 
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It certainly is contrived. Man I liked his chubbier form though. I knew this would happen but still. We got enough conventionally hot guys in this anthology! This guy isn't even high on that list!
 
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I think the story was pretty nice, I think I'd appreciate the ending more if I saw some of the guard appear and seem worried for the ml so the letter at the end doesnt feel as random.
 
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This feels like a sixty-chapter light novel adaptation, so much is going on. Thanks for the chapter!
 
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The beginning was pretty good, but the latter half felt rather rushed.
 
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❎ Villainess
✅ Good art

His hairstyle reminds me of Hubert from FE3H
 

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