Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 11 Ch. 5 - Apparently, I was a National Treasure After Being Exiled!?

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This suffered a bit from overstating things in dialog, such as her mother actually saying "sign over all your property" before the deal was done. I do like we establish the other prince before he meets her; it could possibly have been done better, but this is a oneshot and we can't make everything a twist.

Very good though, shame she didn't wear glasses all the time.
 
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…on one hand want more of this
…on the other hand I’m glad this is just a one shot because if anything happens to this precious introvert then I will kill every living thing in the world and than myself
 
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Her witchy fit was such a good vibe, though... And the freckles were so cute, even if they were just makeup.

Her stepmother accidentally almost invented goth e-girls. She could've been even more insanely rich with Esperance!
 
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'In exchange, I'll leave you an outlying part of our domain.'
'From now on, everything belongs to me and my daughter.'

Stepmom don't need to be smart, she have her signature. Stepmom legally owns everything.
It wasn't really that uncommon for domains to be split up historically. The geographical location doesn't really mean much, the idea of contiguous borders is very much a modern one. Actual feudal era maps are wild. You can read it as the stepmother waiving all rights to that area by leaving it to the MC and revoking her own claim to it because she assumed it was worthless.
 

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