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This suffered a bit from overstating things in dialog, such as her mother actually saying "sign over all your property" before the deal was done. I do like we establish the other prince before he meets her; it could possibly have been done better, but this is a oneshot and we can't make everything a twist.
Very good though, shame she didn't wear glasses all the time.
Very good though, shame she didn't wear glasses all the time.