Thunder City Royal - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Inheritor of a broken land

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Really bad 1 chapter, since you haven't shown us any hook of the story and worse of all, it was so fucking boring. Push this chapter further into the story when we actually care about those characters and make chapter 2 be the start of the story since it shows what this story is about
 
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