Time Paradox Ghostwriter - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - JUMP Through Weekly Time!
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Holy shit! This is bad! Stealing someone else story.
That aside, wow. This is a freshly new story to me. Definitely a weekly jump worthy!
That aside, wow. This is a freshly new story to me. Definitely a weekly jump worthy!
One flaw. Is the author sure there still is a paper version in 10 years time?
Edit; After reading this... Stealing someone else's work aside, could he have at least changed the character NAMES? Well, looking at the last pages, I guess that will come back to bite him...
So to the last pages, if the original author ever gets to read her own future work, how exactly will that work out?...
Edit; After reading this... Stealing someone else's work aside, could he have at least changed the character NAMES? Well, looking at the last pages, I guess that will come back to bite him...
So to the last pages, if the original author ever gets to read her own future work, how exactly will that work out?...
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well , another trashy manga from shonen jump aka shonen dump .
the main male has a stupid , ugly face . i want to punch his face .
a manga about stealing , plagiarism .
the writer even stole the story from a chapter of doraemon . if someone wants to know , then i will upload some pages from that doraemon chapter .
page 8 :
page 9 :
the example serie is about some super-heroes with the nick-names pumpkin-head , banana-head , tomato-head ?
who actually wants to read a kiddy garbage like this ?
page 12 :
page 33 :
this is just a deus ex machina / god magazine out of the micro-wave machine , lol .
the 1st chapter of white knight only has 54 pages ,
but the main male already thinks it is the most bestest manga ever in history ? he is so stupid .
the chief editor is another deus ex machina .
this good-natured editor is so un-realistic , because the merciless shonen dump has axed countless manga-s , they have the most highest number of axed manga-s in the industry .
page 47 :
does the chief editor just sit on the dirty floor like that and ruin his pants ?
page 48 :
and how a lowly worker dares to rudely yank the manga out of the editor 's hands like that ?
page 51 :
so the stupid main male just goes back to his home-town , and he didnt un-plug all the electric machines in his apartment , even the malfunctioned fridge and micro-wave .
this stupidness will cause fire incidents , you know ?
last page :
a shut-in girl who doesnt go to school , but still wears her school uniform ?
and this shut-in girl is very clean , very pretty ? the writer should get some reality checks .
the main male has a stupid , ugly face . i want to punch his face .
a manga about stealing , plagiarism .
the writer even stole the story from a chapter of doraemon . if someone wants to know , then i will upload some pages from that doraemon chapter .
page 8 :
- main male : shonen dump is the most bestest magazine , ... hit serie after hit serie ... , manga history ...
- so the writer thought that by $ucking / stroking the ego of shonen dump , his manga wouldnt get axed . well , he can think again , lol .
page 9 :
the example serie is about some super-heroes with the nick-names pumpkin-head , banana-head , tomato-head ?
who actually wants to read a kiddy garbage like this ?
page 12 :
- ... sucks ... , terrible ... , flat ... , boring ... , bad ...
- this realistic , funny editor is actually describing this "ghost writer" manga , lol .
- main male : i spent 2 months for this 1st story .
- editor : REJECTED .
- now i spent only 1 day for this 2nd story .
- well , this time , what do you think my answer will be ? REJECTED AGAIN .
- now i spent only 1 day for this 3rd story , white knight .
- well .....
- main male : why does shonen dump keep reject my manga-s ?
- well , maybe you should aim more lower next time . shonen dump is a SSS-ranked magazine , maybe you should go for some other F-ranked , or Z-ranked main-stream magazines , or some henta! magazines 1st .
page 33 :
this is just a deus ex machina / god magazine out of the micro-wave machine , lol .
the 1st chapter of white knight only has 54 pages ,
but the main male already thinks it is the most bestest manga ever in history ? he is so stupid .
- main male : chapter 1 is ALWAYS 54 pages , while one-shot is ALWAYS 47 pages .
- er , who made these stupid rules about the fixed numbers of pages ?
- main male : i have been working non-stop and havent slept for 48+ hours , but my body is still fine .
- er , no , normal human body doesnt work like that .
the chief editor is another deus ex machina .
this good-natured editor is so un-realistic , because the merciless shonen dump has axed countless manga-s , they have the most highest number of axed manga-s in the industry .
page 47 :
does the chief editor just sit on the dirty floor like that and ruin his pants ?
page 48 :
- editor : this manga is very good .
- er , no , it is not . the main male can only copy the godly story of white knight , he can not copy the godly art-style with his trashy art-style .
and how a lowly worker dares to rudely yank the manga out of the editor 's hands like that ?
page 51 :
so the stupid main male just goes back to his home-town , and he didnt un-plug all the electric machines in his apartment , even the malfunctioned fridge and micro-wave .
this stupidness will cause fire incidents , you know ?
last page :
a shut-in girl who doesnt go to school , but still wears her school uniform ?
and this shut-in girl is very clean , very pretty ? the writer should get some reality checks .
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