my review of chapter 1 :
well , another trashy manga from shonen jump aka shonen dump .
the main male has a stupid , ugly face . i want to punch his face .
a manga about stealing , plagiarism .
the writer even stole the story from a chapter of doraemon . if someone wants to know , then i will upload some pages from that doraemon chapter .
page 8 :
- main male : shonen dump is the most bestest magazine , ... hit serie after hit serie ... , manga history ...
- so the writer thought that by $ucking / stroking the ego of shonen dump , his manga wouldnt get axed . well , he can think again , lol .
page 9 :
the example serie is about some super-heroes with the nick-names pumpkin-head , banana-head , tomato-head ?
who actually wants to read a kiddy garbage like this ?
page 12 :
- ... sucks ... , terrible ... , flat ... , boring ... , bad ...
- this realistic , funny editor is actually describing this "ghost writer" manga , lol .
- main male : i spent 2 months for this 1st story .
- editor : REJECTED .
- now i spent only 1 day for this 2nd story .
- well , this time , what do you think my answer will be ? REJECTED AGAIN .
- now i spent only 1 day for this 3rd story , white knight .
- well .....
- main male : why does shonen dump keep reject my manga-s ?
- well , maybe you should aim more lower next time . shonen dump is a SSS-ranked magazine , maybe you should go for some other F-ranked , or Z-ranked main-stream magazines , or some henta! magazines 1st .
page 33 :
this is just a deus ex machina / god magazine out of the micro-wave machine , lol .
the 1st chapter of white knight only has 54 pages ,
but the main male already thinks it is the most bestest manga ever in history ? he is so stupid .
- main male : chapter 1 is ALWAYS 54 pages , while one-shot is ALWAYS 47 pages .
- er , who made these stupid rules about the fixed numbers of pages ?
- main male : i have been working non-stop and havent slept for 48+ hours , but my body is still fine .
- er , no , normal human body doesnt work like that .
the chief editor is another deus ex machina .
this good-natured editor is so un-realistic , because the merciless shonen dump has axed countless manga-s , they have the most highest number of axed manga-s in the industry .
page 47 :
does the chief editor just sit on the dirty floor like that and ruin his pants ?
page 48 :
- editor : this manga is very good .
- er , no , it is not . the main male can only copy the godly story of white knight , he can not copy the godly art-style with his trashy art-style .
and how a lowly worker dares to rudely yank the manga out of the editor 's hands like that ?
page 51 :
so the stupid main male just goes back to his home-town , and he didnt un-plug all the electric machines in his apartment , even the malfunctioned fridge and micro-wave .
this stupidness will cause fire incidents , you know ?
last page :
a shut-in girl who doesnt go to school , but still wears her school uniform ?
and this shut-in girl is very clean , very pretty ? the writer should get some reality checks .
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