To Love-Ru - Digital Colored Comics - Vol. 3 Ch. 25 - The Queen's Temptation

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engrishy
lots of awkward sentences, e.g. p.2 panel 2 ("She got a fiance...")
silly spelling mistakes e.g. p.5 panel 1 (hsa -> has)
And p.2 panel 3: "...Hack!" (???)
appreciate the dedication to the contemporary classics, but pleeeeeease put more effort into proofing/qc ;_;
 
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My apologies. This was an earlier attempt. I put in a lot more time proofreading later chapters so there are less mistakes. In fact, these earlier attempts were not done in Photoshop, so updating is a pain too. I will however fix this chapter when I have time

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updated errors
 

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