@Aos1
Not a bad translation by any means and I'm glad that somebody picked this series back up. Just wanted to point out a fairly common mistake made by newer translators, however:
https://jisho.org/word/スタイル
Despite being a loanword from English, "style" in Japanese is generally used to refer to one's figure/physique rather than one's fashion sense. Similarly to how マンション means "apartment" instead of "mansion", the meaning of Japanese loanwords occasionally develop in directions unrelated to the source languages so it's usually best to exercise a bit of caution when encountering them for the first time.