Toki Majutsushi no Tsuyokute New Game ~Kako ni Modotte Sekai Saikyou kara Yarinaosu~

[StoovTV]

Solid story and premise but it would be a lie to say I don't understand why this story got the axe. Couple plot holes that didn't make a lot of sense. For one, why are these people so hell bent on creating these creatures. If the first demon lord was so devastating why would they go forward in creating another within a weeks time of the first. I could go on but eh. I don't want to be nitpicky.

 

[Simanelix]

Look, this type of premise (Second Chance/time loop/time travel) is like my guilty pleasure, but this first chapter and the synopsis couldn't have been more barebones.
This is easily one of the most generic Second Chance premises I have ever seen. Literally no hook or interesting worldbuilding was presented, the first chapter feels like it was crossing off the checklist of the most generic Second Chance tropes and presented literally nothing else of note.

I am predicting it will also be a generic power fantasy since he can use the super rare & OP time magic from the start.
And I don't even want to bother picking apart the holes in the premise that the first chapter didn't even bother addressing in its exposition (although it could explain them later idk) ...

I just sometimes wonder why anyone would make such a generic first chapter, or why anyone would bother reading past a first chapter like this one. (unless this is their first Second Chance story)*

*: If you've just discovered the Second Chance trope and it interests you, you can easily find something better.
If you go to novelupdates, they have a tag for it. There's like a thousand of them. And if you only wanna read comics, you can filter results by adding the "adapted to/from Manga/Manhwa/Manhua" tag to see if it has a comic version, there's hundreds of those.
Just sort by rating and then look it up on Mangadex.

I read this 1st time, and I agree. It was new to me when I read it, but it is pretty generic. What I love though is this story does look into the implications of the actual time magic itself, and I enjoy when magic is treated more like a science. Also, Chrom is so dense that makes him kind of innocent with all the girls. I personally like this, but it is VERY generic, and I can imagine other stories being much better. The magic could be explored much further, and a lot more character development could be added in. Also, the story doesn't need to have such a tragic backstory. It could just focus on a more straight-forward and interesting plot instead.

 

[Monn12]

I read this 1st time, and I agree. It was new to me when I read it, but it is pretty generic. What I love though is this story does look into the implications of the actual time magic itself, and I enjoy when magic is treated more like a science. Also, Chrom is so dense that makes him kind of innocent with all the girls. I personally like this, but it is VERY generic, and I can imagine other stories being much better. The magic could be explored much further, and a lot more character development could be added in. Also, the story doesn't need to have such a tragic backstory. It could just focus on a more straight-forward and interesting plot instead.

Why do you like dense MC's? Genuine question, i always felt out of place since i'm not a demographic for dense and sometimes pure MC's.
As to why, i think because i "played" the dense role myself but i was doing it intentionally.