Tokimori-san ga Muboubi desu!! - Vol. 2 Ch. 18 - Tokimori-san and new employee

[curvedbullet]

oh wow, shitty drama into shitty drama in my sol romance fluff. Exactly what I want....

 

[dowiet]

oh shit new annoying bitch has entered the chat

bruh that's illegal in X number of countries

 

[dustyporcupine]

haha... I hope she gets fired for attempting to get her superior in trouble

 

[InsaneAwesomeTony]

Throws salt demon be gone!

Thanks for the chapter 👍🏼

 

[JumboWheat01]

Instead of moving to her head to talk, talks to her from the foot side, to get a lovely view of her from the groin up.

 

[Minipels]

Bro fl said work and miss big bitch went r/antiwork + twitter + report to Human resources 💀
💀💀💀

 

[xr900]

How did she get hired?

using her crotch ofc

 

[xr900]

a bitch like that exist in every company, aren't they?

 

[Lightningxp]

It went from male audience romcom to female audience shojo real quick

 

[Extreme-Tactician]

More Tokimori and Sugawa goodness! Hand massages are quite the sign of intimacy. It seems their life outside of home has improved as well! But it seems this Igarashi is looking to ruin their work life. Who does she think she is?

 

[GolfAlphaMike]

Funny place to choose to sit at the end of the couch there, buddy. Enjoying the short show?

 

[Sonarin]

Without drama, there'd be nothing going on here. You gotta have something happen in your story. If "woman lazes about while exposing her ass, with typical milquetoast herbivore MC watching" is all you got, you're not gonna get published for long.

have you read " Telework Yotabanashi " ???

 

[brainman]

have you read " Telework Yotabanashi " ???

Sure have, but that's a very different type of story. Very short, with a clearly defined end from the word go, and no wasted panel time anywhere. I guess on the surface it's also about lazing around in apartments and without much in terms of "events", assuming that's the point? But I still don't see how the two compare.
One's an open ended vehicle to deliver ass shots, with some wack self-insert premise as a thin veneer of justification, and drama has to be inserted, because our protagonist has no personality beyond being "nice", and the lady's defining trait is reverting to a child at home. Neither really offers much in terms of narrative thrust, so without external stimulus, there'd be literally nothing happening.
The other has two characters with simple but clearly defined personalities, and is just a short, condense trip from their initial meeting to relationship, with their characters and dialogue driving the plot forward.

 

[Selfisch]

I'm going to put this on hold too, forced drama like this right after we just finished the ex-boyfriend drama just doesn't feel right for this series, I hope it gets back on track because this was really great when it was mostly focusing on them living together, if they want to expand what the series focuses on, no problem. But make it something like other parts of their lives, like more focus on their job and not on some kind of drama that needs to get resolved before the story can move onto the next drama.

My offer to give funds for the raws if the need ever arises still stands tho, I want to read the finished story at some point.

 

[ADIB619]

somethings wrong i can feel it

 

[Chronigan]

This is cute and all but ffs im dropping. what the fuck is this forced drama in this cute series.

Isn't all drama in fiction"forced"

 

[Chronigan]

Fair point, but it would at least need to be natural, at least the asshole guy was quite natural in revealing a bit of Tokimori past, this one feels like someone throw a brick on your face, that's why people keep saying it's forced

Also, to be really fair as well, there are series literally just build on fluff romance alone that are on-going or sells quite well

This type of infighting happens in offices all the time.

 

[Hicleric]

In agreement that the new drama is...unearned. It feels like the story is just lurching from drama to drama without giving the characters a chance to breathe.

I foresee this ending with a bold statement about a "precious senpai/kouhai" just for pretend character advancement tho

 

[draxdeveloper]

Bitch please… do you really think your gonna be able to get her fired/punished??? She’s literally the most hard working person there.

And everyone like her there

 

[Styrr]

ah yes the bitch insufferable co worker

hope she gets booted out

hope the author focuses on just both them instead of throwing something like this again