The extras are looking great. You did an amazing job here.
Only one joke got lost in translation, but that part is hard to translate. I don't know how to make it work in English either.
For those who're interested it's on page 9 where Aria tries to make food.
In Japanese you say something like "make [the food] go ting" when you heat it in the microwave, because of the sound it makes when it's done. Aria has no idea what that means. She takes a package of frozen pasta and hits a glass with a spoon for the ting sound. The pasta is of course still frozen and very cold and crunchy.