Tomodachi tte Konna koto surun da. - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[Chizan]

Are all the pages in right order?

 

[GreenDude1]

This was a fairly comedic first chapter let's see if it can keep it up.

 

[sss-class-Himejoshi]

Are all the pages in right order?

Doesnt seem to much like it :/
Edit: Think its fixed now! Thank you uploader~

 

[K1ing]

Yeah, I wouldn't call this English, and wtf is "bruh idk" on page 4? If you're going to put so little effort into it, you're better off not spending the time and "energy" it took to put out this garbage of a TL. There's a reason why translator jobs actually require being fluent in both the languages being translated from and to. Nobody's asking for professional quality, but at least make it look like you tried, and make it readable to someone who actually speaks English.

 

[Lilathealpha]

Doesnt seem to much like it :/

Thank you so much for bringing this to my attention /fixed!

 

[Lilathealpha]

Yeah, I wouldn't call this English, and wtf is "bruh idk" on page 4? If you're going to put so little effort into it, you're better off not spending the time and "energy" it took to put out this garbage of a TL. There's a reason why translator jobs actually require being fluent in both the languages being translated from and to. Nobody's asking for professional quality, but at least make it look like you tried, and make it readable to someone who actually speaks English.

Fixed it was an un-finished page it must have slipped my mind haha

 

[Lilathealpha]

Yeah, I wouldn't call this English, and wtf is "bruh idk" on page 4? If you're going to put so little effort into it, you're better off not spending the time and "energy" it took to put out this garbage of a TL. There's a reason why translator jobs actually require being fluent in both the languages being translated from and to. Nobody's asking for professional quality, but at least make it look like you tried, and make it readable to someone who actually speaks English.

Deepest apologies I uploaded the finished one now lol I’ll work on my wording from now on! Thanks for the feedback I very much appreciate it!

 

[xvinyx]

God bless Yuri.

 

[FloorRoof]

This is some advanced brainrot. One of them is an aggressive degenerate who invites the other over and immediately forces herself on her. And since that one is completely clueless, she not only never realizes she's being gaslit and exploited, but also leaves halfway through the event without thinking much of it other than being glad to 'have made a friend'.

 

[deathpigeon]

Love lighthearted toxic yuri.

 

[pir0zhki]

I might try again later but for now the translation is just rough enough for my brain to have a hard time staying focused on what's happening. The text is just a bit too stiff. I'd recommend taking more care to apply proper punctuation, which might help it feel more natural.

 

[Lilathealpha]

I might try again later but for now the translation is just rough enough for my brain to have a hard time staying focused on what's happening. The text is just a bit too stiff. I'd recommend taking more care to apply proper punctuation, which might help it feel more natural.

Noted for the next chapters, thank you for your advice!

 

[timpkmn89]

I'm not going to proofread the whole thing, but these were impacting the plot:

Page 5:
"Ugh I'm wet!" -> "Your drink spilled on you"
"Oh I'm sorry about that!" -> "Sorry, it was my fault"
(you can see in the picture who got wet)

Page 13
"I know" -> "...is that true!?"
She's expressing uncertainty

Chapter 2 Page 2:
"transferring and informational apps" -> "a train trip finder"

Chapter 2 Page 6:
"I'm easily impressed" -> "Genuinely impressed"
"For the first time I made out [...]" -> "Wow, that's the first time I came from just my breasts"

 

[Lilathealpha]

I'm not going to proofread the whole thing, but these were impacting the plot:

Page 5:
"Ugh I'm wet!" -> "Your drink spilled on you"
"Oh I'm sorry about that!" -> "Sorry, it was my fault"
(you can see in the picture who got wet)

Page 13
"I know" -> "...is that true!?"
She's expressing uncertainty

Chapter 2 Page 2:
"transferring and informational apps" -> "a train trip finder"

Chapter 2 Page 6:
"I'm easily impressed" -> "Genuinely impressed"
"For the first time I made out [...]" -> "Wow, that's the first time I came from just my breasts"

You are totally right, though I’m not quite sure on the last proofread, but that may just be me /fixed

 

[EchoGirl]

That escalated quickly. Feels like it might backfire when another female 'friend' talks to her and she just starts groping her chest publicly XD

Missed opportunity to translate the title as Gal Pals

i mean a low level uni is still a uni unless there's 'crappy' places that do the bare minimum and let anyone join as long as they pay

page 4 'each other' should be spaced out

 

[FiddlePop]

Love lighthearted toxic yuri.

I was not prepared to read that combination of words

Don't tell me we are getting some wholesome abuse too