Tonari no Kinniku Joshi

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Too short!
My muscle kink needs to be fulfilled!
Still loved it to the very end <3
 
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Very cute story and adorable Couple. Sadly the ending was kinda abrupt and the story too short. Would have loved to see more of those two :)
 
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Seems potentially odd but could be sweet and interesting to enjoy as a romance... as a fan of her One-Shot "The Wife Who Can Read Her Husband's Mind" I'll check this out one day.
 
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Damn it, right when it could become better and more interesting to see them dating as a couple.
I wish we'd get a sequel but I highly doubt it.

I loved that mangaka's The Wife Who Can Read Her Husband's Mind One-Shot and felt this concept was intriguing and as expected it was fairly enjoyable even though the pacing of plots and development wasn't properly timed; including the lacking delivery of more insight or execution to who he's perceived as, his insecurities, and the pressure of education he has from his parents.

From the translator's notes, they reveal to us that this manga wasn't intended to be long so these flaws could potentially be excused but they may not help in warranting for a sequel,
because with that half-assed story which even though I enjoyed and laughed to was decent as a 6/10, it definitely could have been better.

The elements are there but the execution wasn't strong.
Although, maybe she would consciously have better writing for the sequel as this one was only a tease.

Who knows. Anyway, point is it'd be nice to have a sequel. It has potential.
Her facial features are a little too manly but they fit to the comedy of the male being a contrast. ... Gotta say though, her smile/grin is beautiful, so, she can be charming.
 

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