Too Close

[Mjane]

I need more chapters uwu😭

 

[somni]

I was kinda hoping Xu Ze would be the uke but it seems he's actually the seme. Not complaining though they're still cute <3

 

[zDarkness]

What do you mean by completed '-'

 

[Benetnasch]

wait, something is missing T-T

 

[Satsumiko]

@zDarkness completed refers to the raws

 

[FancyTuna]

Sadly, I'm dropping this one. I really liked where it was going

Spoiler

pre-timeskip

but everything feels way too rushed and unnatural now. A real shame, I'd recommend 'The Story About Me x You' as an alternative. Really similar premise, way better execution.

 

[quassont]

@FancyTuna I agree. It's good and all, but was taken aback by

Spoiler

the time skip.

I thought the story would continue to touch on the struggles of trying to figure out one's self and orientation as a young person, and coming to terms with it.

I'll keep reading (I'm only @ chapter 50 as of now) just to see where it goes, though.

(edit: Also, yes, "The Story About You x Me" is so damn good and very worthwhile. If "Too Close" ever disappoints any of you, go read that one to heal lmao.)

 

[Lilsoybean]

Spoiler

Cliffhanger

waaaaaaah

 

[RiSA__]

Some people already said that but if you're disappointed with Too Close, The Story About You x Me has basically the same initial idea (delinquent vs. vice president kinda thing) and a way better execution. It's sweet and slow, feels very natural!

 

[Ilady_anna]

I really liked this story but this all goes down with the time skip that ruins everything

 

[Rexpyl]

the story was really good until the

Spoiler

time skip

. i just think it would have been better if they executed their life during highschool.

 

[JAPisawesome]

To be honest, I think the time-skip idea could've worked but they just got back together way too quickly. I think the sudden separation actually makes sense in the context of young love: if the author developed the relationship more before the time skip, and then had their characters dramatically change after the time skip rather than having them get back together in like 10 chapters, I think it would've been a interesting story. The way the time-skip is now makes it seem like between high school and college the character relationships stayed almost the same, which makes no sense.

 

[Retrovert]

Will this have a second season? The ending didn't feel like an ending at all...

 

[igotnosleepah]

@retrovert it's still ongoing so there will be more chapters

 

[Bu-young]

Baby no that ain’t your man-