Too Late

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Rather than finding it moving... I find myself feeling more that it was at least short enough that I didn't care about any of the characters yet when it decided to shit on the carpet. ~w~;;

It just doesn't feel like it has the emotional depth to do the thing it seemed to have set out to do—even taking the brevity into account. Unless the point is just a middle finger jabbed up into the air, I suppose.
 
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Wtf man
Author didn’t have to do her like that
;-;
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