Too Many Losing Heroines! - Ch. 20.1

[MangaDex]

 

[timotheus_rex]

This manga feels a bit disjointed, but I don't know why.

 

[w1987g]

This manga feels a bit disjointed, but I don't know why.

I think it's because we keep seeing it from MC's point of view. Bro has no idea what to do in life, much less in matters of the heart

 

[VahnRPG]

The heck? Didn't this one get uploaded already? Or was it a reupload for quality?
(either way, too damn short >.<' hate partial chapter stuff that's become so prevalent in manga these days...not a knock on the TL, on manga in general)

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the release

 

[Akane02]

Why she looks so hot in manga.....

 

[Tymo]

Is the anime ahead of the manga?

Also, if so, how long does it take in the novel until mc starts to be better developed? Because it's becoming kinda tiring to watch him being an "errand boy" all the time and just going with the flow.

 

[coyote_vdb]

Thanks for the translation.
I actually like that the MC is more an observer than an actor in all actions. That's what sets this manga apart from the rest of the standard romcoms.

 

[panzerkampfwagyu]

This manga feels a bit disjointed, but I don't know why.

props also the half chapters cutting off where the author didn't intend to pe a cut

 

[havelmom]

This manga feels a bit disjointed, but I don't know why.

the mangaka is slow and he's skipping over details in an attempt to "keep up with the anime"
he's like a really slow speedrunner: his time is bad + he's skipping things
the solution would be hiring assistants to help churn out more pages, specially since it's a monthly

 

[Nixeu]

props also the half chapters cutting off where the author didn't intend to pe a cut

Yep. Also, in the case of fragmented chapters, I think the translators are more likely to lack necessary context, and so mistranslate more often. Even when you put the partial chapters Xaar puts out together, there can be issues with coherence. I think that's why the full chapters from the other scanlation team, while they're a lot longer in coming, are significantly more coherent.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

This manga feels a bit disjointed, but I don't know why.

It reads much better in collected form. The split chapters kill all story momentum.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

Is the anime ahead of the manga?

Also, if so, how long does it take in the novel until mc starts to be better developed? Because it's becoming kinda tiring to watch him being an "errand boy" all the time and just going with the flow.

He starts becoming a real party to the story in the latter half of V3, fully drives the story beginning in V4 but doesn't really accept and admit it to himself (or, perhaps, has accepted it for some time [possibly as early as the aftermath of the climax of V4] and is only just then admitting it to the reader; Kazu is a terribly unreliable narrator, particularly when it comes to his true self) until the opening chapters of V6.