Tousled Melancholy - [ONESHOT]

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Heyyyy she went for the kisss!!!! YAYYYYY that was really cute.
Idk if blonde suits her but whatever if they're happy XP
She doesn't look adult at all... I even thought it was the owner's daughter who was just learning.
Thanks for the sweet story and MERRY XMAS!!!
 
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A cute one-shot and it's nice to see that progress was made at the end between them instead of leaving it open
 

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Even in original stories their characters just look like yuyushiki characters.
 
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Her hair was getting progressively worse every time it changed.

She looked the best at the very beginning...

Terrible hairdresser, 2/10.
 
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Awful hair styles, especially the bleach.

Overall nice oneshot though, thanks 0mniessence.
 
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Short cuts are cute, though. Her original cut was so boring.
 
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pg 11, "I know regularly get" -> "I now regularly get"

pg 25, "they hairstyle" -> "the hairstyle"
 
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I have concerns on how they fell for each other.
What would have been nice is a time frame to work with, because I'm a bit bad at judging things like this.
Was nice I guess though?
 
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Glad I stumbled over this again! It’s just so cute and pure and cute and cute haha
 

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