Toy Paradise - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[RimuruH]

Well that was thrilling and terrifying! Yes this deserves serialisation!

 

[judevin28]

This oneshot was the complete opposite of what Slime Life is.

 

[KJIJH]

this needs a serialization I want more fnaf amusement park

 

[Hibernall]

Damn. I want more

 

[Metazoxan]

and this is why full automation is a horrible idea. IT's fine with digital interfaces but we can't let A.I be in full control of anything physical.

One little glitch and everyone dies.

That being this would need a few tweeks to be able to have a serialization IMO.

The main cast's group needs to be bigger with more survivors in order to start with a larger established cast.

A few pacing tweeks might be good as well as this was good for a one shot but a little faced paced if it's meant to be an actual serial. Maybe expand on the events a little to make it two chapters OR isntead of making the main cast's groups bigger jump between a few different groups to have them all meet up later.

Either way while it needs some adjustments I could see this being a decent series. The base concept is basically "west world" but with cuter themes.

 

[00nowhereman]

Deadman wonderland vibe

 

[xannha]

page 12 4th bubble

 

[ShittyKoreanTranslator]

@xannha Fixed, don't know how I missed just the middle of the page.

 

[Doomroar]

Really it was good but by no means it is worth it taking time away from Slime Life.
If the author didn't had any other ongoing project this would be an excellent back up plan for serialization.