Trinity Seven: Anastasia Holy Story - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Act 1: Anastasia & The 4 Demon Lord Knights

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page 23 has 3 untranslated speech bubbles. there's about 30 spots to correct, mostly grammar mistakes, others are like the Spanish upside down question mark that doesn't get used in English. And Anastasia=L instead of Anastasia-L.

I'm not here to kick you around for perfection, just pointing out a few things while I was reading.
 
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Yeah dude you really need to find a proofreader. There's too many grammatical mistakes.

Thanks for the chapter tho, Anastasia is one of the few girls I like in the series
 

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