Trinity Seven: Liese Chronicle - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1 - Crossing Time

[MangaDex]

 

[Asynchria]

Looks interesting, thanks for sharing this!

If I may offer some constructive criticism: You could use a QA pass for the lettering on this. There's a few easy mistakes that could be fixed if you had someone skim it to make sure it all looked okay. Some dots/smudge leftover from the original JP text, there are no hyphenated-words anywhere around, even though there are multiple instances of words being
broke
n up in speech bubbles (like I did there as an example) and there are a few bubbles where a comma appears at the beginning of a new line instead of after the word like on page 9.

Although
, nobody realizes it..

Translation isn't quite the best either, but it's passable enough to follow what's being said.

Definitely looking forward to more of this series, though! So please keep it up

 

[SilverWold]

@Hezkezl Thank you for pointing it out
as you can tell I'm a newbie at translating

 

[Merppity]

I appreciate the scan, but I'm beyond confused on what's actually happening...

 

[SilverWold]

@Merrpity Read Trinity Seven main Story When Arata enters Dante's gate

 

[tajboy123]

Thanks dude ! ~

Its groovy now that someone is translating best girls side story. I appreciate it !

 

[Ichigo69]

Thanks for doing this, but you really need a Proofreader/QC on this. Preferably somebody who is a native English speaker.