Tsuihou Sareta Ossan Kajishi, Nazeka Densetsu no Daimyouko ni Naru ~Mukashi Omocha no Buki o Tsukutteageta Kodomotachi ga Zenin Eiyuu ni Natteita~ - …

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chapter felt quite odd to read, "the one who pursued(???) amatsurugi" "it's even telet(???)" "sharpen with a magnet(???)" on the last page, the guy that is supposedly Senji calls out to the phony guildmaster using senji, what? 'Silver Craftsman' also feels weird considering we're talking blacksmiths, and looking at it again, chapter one also has some weird sentences. Are you guys using AI?
 
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While I greatly appreciate releases, this is borderline slop.

chapter felt quite odd to read, "the one who pursued(???) amatsurugi" "it's even telet(???)" "sharpen with a magnet(???)" on the last page, the guy that is supposedly Senji calls out to the phony guildmaster using senji, what? 'Silver Craftsman' also feels weird considering we're talking blacksmiths, and looking at it again, chapter one also has some weird sentences. Are you guys using AI?
what this guy said

I've seen a terminal cancer patient in hospice have top-tier releases. If one of the most prolific groups can't even get someone to spend 5 minutes proofreading this half-translated mess then just don't release it.
 
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However make sense the translation is, I still don't like how that little boy just let that guy other than the requested or the maker repairing the sword. Why not just refuse and come back to the castle and report, like for sure it is better than letting some unknown temperament guy repairing an evolving weapon that he himself couldn't believe it exist. Such special weapon should just be handled by the original creator or the other that know and can theorize the process of making the weapon.
It's like you bring your black screen Laptop to a random rude electronic repairman that usually fix fan, lamp, dispenser or such. I mean sure it is electronic but it is way above the league of ordinary electronic repairman.
 
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The guild master of a blacksmithing guild has never sharpened a sword before...smh. He was grossly overconfident in abilities he's never even attempted. Well after breaking a holy sword deemed a national treasure he won't have to worry about any drains on the guilds resources anymore.
 
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I respect that he was willing to go out of his comfort zone to try new things. I mean, I wouldn't have the balls to try sharpening a weapon for the first time, on a weapon that belonged to a queen. He definitely has more guts than me.
 
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chapter felt quite odd to read, "the one who pursued(???) amatsurugi" "it's even telet(???)" "sharpen with a magnet(???)" on the last page, the guy that is supposedly Senji calls out to the phony guildmaster using senji, what? 'Silver Craftsman' also feels weird considering we're talking blacksmiths, and looking at it again, chapter one also has some weird sentences. Are you guys using AI?
Yeah.... Even Google translate on the WN didn't make those mistakes
 

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