at the second half of the maga plot felt a bit too fast overall and main characters centered heavily, that could use some work ans even so was still good. as dukkface said better than a lot of stuff out there nowadays
Thank you for all the hard work for bringing this story to us. Tsukikage Baby was lovely and it will be a part of me from now on. I feel like stories that have great characters and meaningful interactions are the best. I'm glad I got a chance to read this.