The translation is good but I don't understand why you posted this series under a completely made-up fake name when that's not remotely the actual name of the series 🤔 I got confused because the Japanese text in the cover image didn't match and I also thought it was a manga adaptation of a light novel but the name was completely different. Turns out it's the same series. The page even links to the correct title on MyAnimeList so I don't really understand why.