Tsuyokute New Saga - Ch. 107.1

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He didn't fight him before, he found against a demon lord and reactions to his appearance in previous fights imply that this is the only timeline that black wings is in.
And another version of MC would have been perfect twist that everyone was waiting for...
I think it was just axed and author just wanted to end it.
 
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:pout: wut? Shota sword going final getsuga tenshou to kill a random nobody?
 
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These last few chapters have this lingering feeling that I can only explain with this uncomplete meme template:

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I'm just waiting for the plot twist to happen so the meme can be fully completed.
 
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Are they never going to show his/her face? This is such a weird way of dealing with the "final boss". Attack them while they're preoccupied with a book...? Seriously?
Maybe he's Sildonia's twin or something. Being the MC was never going to be quite right for the kind of time travel this is.
 
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Even without it being the MC, it's also super inorganic for the story to just.. have the MC and his spirit sword companion basically sum up the entire backstory of the villain out of fucking nowhere like they needed a 5 minute smoke break to realize everything going on off-screen. None of it was hinted at properly besides the soul fusion matter.
 
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The reveal is like suddenly splashed with a bucket of cold water out of of nowhere.

It does bring up a possible interesting implication. The “homonculus” is trying to merge with itself by going back to the past, and that’s it. If Sildonia is right, when he is successful, he’ll just do it again. So who’s to say how many times he has done this before. It’s possible that he has been looping until Kail finally break it.
Consequentially, once he failed to loop whatever stack he has would’ve been lost (not that he cares) and instead Kail end up stacking with himself (once).:thonk:

Anyway, the theory aside. The plot is interesting, but as other posters have written, the storytelling could be better and perhaps the author got burnt out.
 
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...Ok, so the demon lord is just an ancient bioweapon, and we get all the exposition in just one chapter?

Ngl, it feels kind of underwhelming....would have like it more if he/she/it got more development and foreshadowing first or something.
 

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