@Insanityprism Exactly what I was thinking. Or rather, how did it get in. Not only the corpse, but the fishes as well. His window seems to be closed. So, how did they get in a room that was supposedly closed and locked?
Not only that, but okay...lets say he's a heavy sleeper, is it to the point that he won't hear people screaming from being eaten alive? I'm sure that there was probably a lot of fighting and screaming. People don't just killed without resisting. And if they resist, they will make noise. I mean, even I'm a heavy sleeper, but I'm sure I'll wake if my room gets flooded, there's a corpse that probably does smell not even a feet away from my bed, and people are getting killed, screaming and etc. in the same building.
*facepalm*
So many things wrong with the story. I can ignore the art, since it isn't too horrendous that I can't look at it, but if the 1st chapter has so many things wrong already, it's obvious the story won't be any good. It's a shame too, seeing as how I thought the plot was a little interesting.