Unko & Tanaka - Unko & Tanaka

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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I wasn't feeling this one. Art is fine, if not partiularly noteworthy, but the story is just so rushed and paper thin. Neither the protagonist or antagonist/deuteragonist leave much of an impression. I don't know. I think the author either needed more pages or perhaps more experience.
 
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Yeah, it just didn't connect. Needed an editor to smooth the rough parts out.
 
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It's a coming-of-age story, that's for sure. It's like... the story is written and the character are made... y'know?
 

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