I like the idea, really hope it doesn't turn into overly drawn out angst. Maybe if she had confessed right before the thread showed up it would be a bit better.
Dang, i came here to say exactly that. So it’ll be a bit of human dramaHuh... I don't dislike this... but I do think there is substantial potential in a different version of this idea, where the two leads aren't tied together by the red string of fate, but still fall for each other, proving that fate (and heteronormativity) does not rule supreme, where two people without threads, indeed two women can love each other, rather than Metaphysically Validated Gay.
Agreed.Huh... I don't dislike this... but I do think there is substantial potential in a different version of this idea, where the two leads aren't tied together by the red string of fate, but still fall for each other, proving that fate (and heteronormativity) does not rule supreme, where two people without threads, indeed two women can love each other, rather than Metaphysically Validated Gay.