@sarusa I'm not even sure what are you criticizing with that cleaning/typesetting stuff you're talking about. I saw nothing wrong in this TL.
Bah, in fact, this is better than many other TLs I saw, because I often find myself really disliking how others try to redraw some Japanese SFX and stuff into English like that - I very much so prefer it to be left as it was and just optionally add little notes explaining them next to that stuff or somewhere outside of the panels.
Thanks for the kind words, all. Stupid but cute is justice.
@Karsh I do wish I could have cleaned the one big panel where she confesses (and mixes up her thoughts) but the speech bubbles contain art. Otherwise, yeah, I prefer having the original FX with annotations. Which is good, because that's all I can do!