mhmmm... strange series.
It is stated, by author's choice, that the best part of the outfit, as portrayed by the author, is the butt, and we have 2 or 3 shots of it.
Cool.
But most of the time, the pov focus on breasts. Feels like it lacks direction and focus?
If its a series about butt, show more butt. If its a series about boobs, then why mention the butt?
If its a series about both, just a slight tweak of words would work.