Fed-Kun's army
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Thanks for translating the last couple of chapters. In it's best chapters it felt like this manga had different vibe then a lot of wannabe suggestive manga with an obvious pairing that never goes anywhere. It also differs from straight hentai or erotica with constant seggs. We don't often get to see in detail a high school (basically, though not official) couple stumble upwards into progress, physically and steadily. Chinana doesn't feel like a explicit hentai lead (like the teacher kek) or the often brain dead female isekai love interest. The FMC has an ego/bluff to maintain and can be idiot in mosts aspects of that, but that's just a front she aspires to be. Her ego is often the catalyst for lewd stuff happening. Having both perspectives of the Chinana and Kinuta, that throughout their mishaps/bluffs/general actions with each they both are physically progressing and growing feelings because of it. The main couple's dynamic was fun, the comedy plays into the lewdness, and vice versa, without "reset button on lewd things happening" nonsense or overhanging "will-they-won't-they" lame ass drama. You can say that it was seggs baiting, but I thought to a point, that made each chapter have more interesting (i.e. it really felt like they could've stumbled into it at a couple different earlier points). It's kinda lame that they didn't commit to seggs, but she couldn't handle it from context so far. I'm fine with them being honest with each other and going steady.
In the lewdest of chapters, the art was great and was as good as solid hentai. Not withstanding the L chapters, the core idea of this could be polished, done again, and could be great.
In the lewdest of chapters, the art was great and was as good as solid hentai. Not withstanding the L chapters, the core idea of this could be polished, done again, and could be great.
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