Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Oct 3, 2019
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I feel like the big issue is just the premise running thin. Theres not really a story or any forward movement. Its just a repeated "wow this girl is super horny!" Reaction.
I'm having trouble getting a bead on the main character's feelings. At first she had super low self esteem, now she wants a harem. But slso she gets super jealous. Where are we going with this? What are her priorities?
I'm having trouble getting a bead on the main character's feelings. At first she had super low self esteem, now she wants a harem. But slso she gets super jealous. Where are we going with this? What are her priorities?
