Valhalla Otintin-kan - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - A Pro Gamer Move

[Adabido]

the translation is making this manga ten times funnier and also can we get a working discord link? i think the one on your page is expired

 

[Hamahaki]

The shitty jokes make this better (and make pp bigger)

A fucking PENCIL

 

[Meepster]

Proper translation? This IS the proper translation.

 

[hartex92]

I prefer this one much more than the 1st one because 1st one is too cringy and lots of unnecessary on every pages, also he is using Indonesian slang (croot/fap2) too much that killed the mood to read.

But, he fixed some of it and never use that slang anymore because lots reader complaints about that and now this is the one I like right now.
1.Reasonable amount of references
2.No excessive forced jokes
3.Funny moments and dialogues
4.Translation is good and 'proper' with some pun included

 

[primordia]

I don't get why people are hating, the guy is translating for you like even if u don't thank him at least don't be rude

 

[Robbini]

As long as it isn't actually too far off the actual text in context...

Meme them up , scotty.

 

[Argonautilus]

never change

 

[iratemanga_andstuff]

dude like I kinda don't care if you meme it up if you actually do a very good translation . Bro i gotta say that this a pretty good and you are funny as hell

 

[weeabootrash]

I like this translation.

 

[Koneko_Nyaa]

Please don't make the translation any more 'proper' than it already is...
I'm literally reading this for this translation...

 

[AbCdE321]

is snusnu a Futurama reference?

 

[dyedAtWork]

Better every day!!!

 

[BusinessGL]

Fuck proper translation, if there was this would be to cringe

 

[couscous]

A more literal translation would probably be extremely boring

 

[Jathcas]

I'm in love with the translation. Never stop doing it.

 

[itsjenyoumen]

Ah yes the most japanese name ever used Carl.

 

[obsidianpassion]

What are you talking about @tomoshibi - sama , this is the proper translation, thank you.

Also I can't believe they are keeping this escort a virgin as long as possible, Japanese culture has an unhealthy obsession with virginity.

 

[jdexo1]

the proofreader should cross out the cringe Japanese transliterations tho. that's what kills it for me. I mean, shitty mtls are fine with me as long as they're readable; better than doing it myself, but if you can translate it you kinda should. I find japanglish actually annoying.

and yes I'm aware this is a retarded manga about kids being whored out and abused and one retard enjoying it

 

[Zhyren]

The translation on this is goddamn fantastic!

 

[SilverHarken]

So, she is a john wick with tits?