It's gotta be PM fuckboys who want a legit translation, this pile shite is only good bc of the dank memes. If done well this could be the manga version of Ghost Stories. Also it's called Valhalla Penis Mansion why are you trying to take this seriously when even the title is a meme.
The translation is perfect for this pseudohentai , if it were a serious translation then it would be bland , those that are complaining aren't real fans.
I cant wait to see how much he grows in 3 years.
THIS IS THE PROPER TRANSLATION
you are making wonders with a mediocre jap smut story, keep going mate, your translation is actually making this a good read.