Versus - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Last Hope

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didnt even read the first panel and i could tell this was a ONE manga
 
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Nooooo, Leewan! He reminds of Rock Lee.
Actually, he looked to me like a fusion of Rock Lee and Roy from Fire Emblem.
 
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i like ONE and his manga-s one punch man and mob psycho 100 .

but this is a very bad , lame 1st chapter of versus .

1st , the name is lame . "versus" ? that is it ? how about a more longer and more meaningful name ?
this reminds me of the lame names of some trashy manga-s of the trashy mitsuru adachi : nine ? touch ? slow step ? rough ? h2 ? cross game ? q and a ? mix ?

page 8 :
the real reason for the number 47 : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Forty-seven_rōnin

and where is my hero 47 / agent 47 ? lol : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Agent_47

  • king : there are 47 demon kings + 1 great demon king + many demon minions = 3254785+ demons , so i will train exactly 47 ugly male heroes because i has fallen in love with the number 47 , i want to marry this number .
  • yo king , are you stupid ? how about training as much heroes as you can , like 78543598452+ heroes .

page 9 :
  • random ugly hero : it will be a race to see which ugly hero kills his demon king 1st .
  • no , it will be a race to see which hero gets killed 1st , lol , you over-confident weakling .

random board : "41st ugly hero - alicia" .
these boards are useless , and the ugly heroes 's numbers are useless , i guess they just blindly , randomly picked their numbers from a lottery box .
i want some useful informations , like their ages , genders , rankings , hobbies , magics , specialties , their elementals , ...

page 11 :
and finally , we see the "main character" , "hallow" . from now on , i will call him "hollow" , lol .
hollow 's hair is ugly , and his face is ugly , bland , generic , typical , average , common .
and his face is even more uglier when he is nervous , scared , sad or angry .

in this chapter , the only cute girl is the healer girl in hollow 's party ? and there is no cute girl among the 47 ugly heroes ?
does ONE HATE girls or something ? for example : tatsumaki is the only girl among the s-class heroes in one punch man .

page 18 :
- the king is very dumb so he sends out these informations : all other 46 heroes are all dead , you are the last hero . i bet this info will give you more higher morale and confidence , lol . do your best .

  • "abyss" and his "genius squad" are very strong .
  • "thunder hero abyss" is very strong .
  • "lightning magical beast gora" is very strong .
  • my tip for the writer : show , dont tell .

page 34 : the cute healer girl is dead instantly ? at the very least , i wanted to see these scenes : she gets gobbed / gets goblined by the goblins , lol .

and even the personality of "hollow" is bland and boring . the fairy panepane and the demon king jachi have more interesting personalities .

page 49 : zaybi-nii-chan has white hair , but has black eye-brows ?

so the mages 's final plan is : summoning another earth to their earth ? how exactly does this work ? summoning an isekai island to their big ocean is possible , but summoning an isekai planet ?

and it looks like they didnt research beforehand at all , and just summoned a random isekai planet , and just hoped that the good aliens will be able to help them .
what if it is the planet of xenomorph , or of yautja , or of prehistoric , ancient cavemen ?

page 67 :
  • guy with gun : captain , "I have a feeling we are not in Kansas anymore" . it looks like we are on another planet . and some aliens are fighting with some aliens , should we rescue some aliens ?
  • captain : no , why should we give a damn about them and pick a side ? we will just watch them killing each other , then we will kill the survivors and rob their golds , lol .

last pages :
  • guy with gun : we come from a future world with advanced technology . and you guys are just some prehistoric , ancient cavemen . we are smart and strong . you are stupid and weak . you even need help with the weak demons . and now we want to ask you to help us with a problem that we cant solve .
  • yo , are you dumb ? we are stupid and weak , so how can we help you ?

  • guys with swords : hey , kill the demons for us , and save our world .
  • guys with guns : I Missed the Part Where That Was My Problem ( quote of spider man , lol ) .

  • guys with guns : hey , save our world from some things .
  • guys with swords : I Missed the Part Where That Was My Problem , lol .
 

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