I like both original and redraw, but the original wins, 'cause of the bloodstained sleeve.
I'm curious, though... given that Mochi Au Lait is a duo, do they both draw manga?
If yes, then was the original drawn by one, and the redraw drawn by the other? Or did a single mangaka draw both versions?
Don't come at me! I mean, it looks to me like two different artists at work -- I just want to be sure. The info online is vague.