Fed-Kun's army
- Joined
- Oct 16, 2018
- Messages
- 635
@vodkavodka The story is thought out enough for me to give it anything but a 3. The art is ok but the story is actively trying to turn me away and it doesn't make me laugh. A story like this only works if the MC was determined to stay a virgin because he hates women and not because he couldn't get one. Makes it so stupid when he turns them down. Its even dumber if he turns down the idol that hes basing his entire thing off of.