Thank you for translating this fun story!
Unfortunately, you've got some probable errors: page 9 panel 3, page 15, page 18 panel 4, page 19 panel 3, page 22 panels 1 and 2, page 26 panel 1, page 30 panel 1, page 38 panel 3/4, and page 52 panel 4.
Also, covering Loïc's face on page 24 panel 1… (if you needed to cover anywhere in that part of the panel, it would have been better to cover his chest instead).
That random bully-abductor just up and evaporated after page 45…