Wan Gu Shen Wang - Ch. 106

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[Asakura]

Thanks for the chapter~

Edit:
Now for some correction/suggestion

- Page 1: just to make the convo flow better, change "...It is more difficult for us to escape!" to "...It's now more difficult for us to escape!" or "...it is more difficult for us to escape now!"

- Page 8: instead of "Headmaster Hua send us to get into Jing Dong Tian to rescue the student that got trap inside", wouldn't "Headmaster Hua send us to get into Jing Dong Tian to rescue the students that got traped inside" be better? past tense or what not, since the students being already being trapped.

- Page 9: "After the task is finish..." >> "After the task finish...", but I dunno about this 1, since English not really my first language...

That all from me, good work and stay safe~ Thank you (really really thank you) for picking this up and doing it with coherent English.

 

[andysulung]

@Asakura
thanks again as always for pointing it out

come and join us in discord to let me know my mistake easier