If one removes the MC being molested at the start of ch 1, the rest would be way better.
As it is now, it too rushed, much of the development is jumped, characters take contradicting actions, and dialogues are needlessly messed up. Additionally, those two pages have absolutely no impact on the rest of the story, which also has a milder tone than that start.
Nonetheless, even without those two pages some points would still be too rushed, and too many things happen exclusively for the plot.