Watashi, Kumo na Monster wo Tame Shitanode, Spider Silk de Saiho wo Ganbarimasu! - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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Ah, was about to comment that this is actually a Chapter 3, I think the poster can fix it themselves.
 
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I've said this in another work...But author's can't just go around calling a thing a "magic something" (and in both instances, it happens to be a "magic bus") if there's not also a non-magical variant of that thing in operation as well.
 
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I've said this in another work...But author's can't just go around calling a thing a "magic something" (and in both instances, it happens to be a "magic bus") if there's not also a non-magical variant of that thing in operation as well.
Look at page 15, I think the long distance bus might be a train
 
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Look at page 15, I think the long distance bus might be a train
The issue isn't what it is or isn't. Author could call it a "magic train" and the point would still stand -- unless there's a non-magical counterpart also operating, adding the "magic" modifier is foolish.
 
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Just wanted to say thanks for the tl. Whether it's by magic bus or train, it's a great trip... yeah i had to stop myself from saying it's a hell of a ride.
 
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Good to see this series getting updates again. It's a pretty wholesome storyline.

A year or two ago I read through most of the WN on kakuyomu, so I was confused when I saw the first chapter was only posted 4 months ago. 😅
 

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