Misaligned text runs, completely untranslated text bubbles, awkward stilted dialogue. This ain't it. Not even halfway through and I already wanted to bail...
Best not to make the translation pure AI. Makes the TL all clunky and confusing because it misses important details (e.g. gender). Also you didn't align some text bubbles right (some of them weren't translated at all). Maybe you should redo the chapter....