Watashi no Kaku Sekai wa Kowareteiru.

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The story's about a girl who's trying to become an artist and fulfill her dream of drawing since she was young. Her family is a bit fractured, her parents got divorced, her brother lives with the father and she lives with her mother. We learn that she has a goal of entering the Art University by entrance exams, so in order to do so she attends the prep school to prepare for it. Unfortunately, due to the jealousy of some of her classmate, some fight broke out. And the aftermath of this event she gains a huge trauma of people talking behind her back, and so having a fall out with her mother, she left the house and went to meet his older brother, who is living alone and work to earn a living. But that doesn't stop here, as she develops schizophrenia and requires attention and medication, to the point where her brother worked his ass through a month to get the medicine for her, but she threw it a way, lead to her brother lost his cool. Eventually this tragically makes her want to off herself, by cutting though her wrist. Fortunately, her brother found out soon enough, as she had just done it, talked her out and took her to the hospital. Here we see the whole family reunites again, and helps her through the rehabilitation, as she realizes her true passion for drawing and for art. The story ends with her taking an award of the competition, as she has succeeded in chasing her dream, and as for her family situation, you'll just have to read that for yourself

Overall, for a few characters that the story offers, the main plot line is decent and finalized all the main plot point. But still it can do better for this arc
Her rehabilitation from her injuries and her mental treatment could be further explored
It's all about the pacing. And again it's a little bit off at the end. I'd say the story gets a 7/10
 

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