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is that foreshadowing the last panel? the one getting stabbed is "Disaster" ? and magic-sealing sword should be one from orichalcum? dear? so its Kaoru?
hmmm
 
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so, essentially, we got one good scene with our MC and then the manga goes hiatus? while the authors comment state he wants to work with the artist again in the future, this might not necessarily translate into a guarantueed continuation of the publication.
 
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MC is just sticking to his will and respect all the characters in the game he likes including Butao’s feeling toward Kaoru so the way he stays basically neutral and not going around building a harem cheer squad is already better than load of shitty isekais out there (Bro having an oshii who hates him is funny tho).
Seems like the manga artist for this adaptation got a whole lot better toward the end of this volume , the action scenes got better along with paneling.
Nah, the problem is that he's not recognized
He's not cool as a hero who disguises himself (he still treated like crap by everyone because he's fat) and also not good as a protagonist since he's always reacting to the plot
And in the novel the heroines are slowly being taken away by other players and game MC (Yuuma)
 
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ok. so butao felt insecure and started harassing kaoru. kinda feel sorry for kaoru now.
well, I thought it was gonna be more that, considering how his family has been treating him kindly so far. or maybe they just didn't know what he did?
 
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What a way to finish an arc. There's no cliffhanger bait yet a few plot points has been left open in a tasteful way.
 
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ok. so butao felt insecured and started harassing kaoru. kinda feel sorry for kaoru now.
well, I thought it was gonna be more that, considering how his family has been treating him kindly so far. or maybe they just didn't know what he did?
Not really, it's mostly her fault because in the novel she's aware of his feelings for her
The reason she did not do anything about that situation is because of the magical marriage contract
 
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I think the reason why many people who read this manga didn't like the MC is because he choose to not be active in the story. Which is the opposite of what most people think of, when it comes to engaging storytelling.
And the MC's choices here are still perplexing. Because all of this "preserving the story" was for Kaoru to defeat/prevent the major disaster that will happened later.
Then the issue became, the author stuck the MC in school dramas and not getting him involve with trying to work toward stopping the disaster or help the Heroine get stronger, which would be typical way to write this type of story. Author wants to try their own way for sure, but I am not sure they pull this off...
 
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Can someone spoil me max the rest of the story? And what’s under the armor of best girl tenma akira ?
 
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I guess this is the chance to erase this thing from your head and "liberate" yourself :dogkek:

anyway, thx for the free tl, you're :thumbsup:
 
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This is also what I thought, despite being in control, the MC does not feel like he's actually in "control", Butao is still controlling the MC, unlike Tsukishima at least seems to be doing things on his own accord and even Nitta seems free. It's such a shame cause the art is actually good and the battle scenes looks amazing. The author should never write again or at least have their work be heavily watched to remove or at least reduce the amount of bullshit they add to their work. If the MC instead got put inside Tsukishima's character, this would've been bearable.
As goofy as it sounds, i wonder how many of these authors ever attended writing classes. It’d probably help a lot of them.
 
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Can someone spoil me max the rest of the story? And what’s under the armor of best girl tenma akira ?
I second this. I want to get off this ride, its feeling like rent-a-gf.

Like what‘s point of all the Kaoru shit? Does she even matter? Does anything other than the “story” matter?
 
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ok. so butao felt insecured and started harassing kaoru. kinda feel sorry for kaoru now.
well, I thought it was gonna be more that, considering how his family has been treating him kindly so far. or maybe they just didn't know what he did?
MC took over the fatso before things got worse and he got expelled. (which is the game's concluded timeline/story). But he was already an insecure little bitch enough to the point off making Kaoru repulsed by him. MC just arrived before he could do worse.
 
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Thank you so much for taking this series from the other shitter group lmao.

Truthfully while the dual natures of Mc is interesting in concept it’s rather annoying in action lmao but I look forward to more nonetheless
 
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As goofy as it sounds, i wonder how many of these authors ever attended writing classes. It’d probably help a lot of them.
For real, having just a basic consistent flow in the story seems like an allergy to most of manga authors.
 
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Nah, the problem is that he's not recognized
He's not cool as a hero who disguises himself (he still treated like crap by everyone because he's fat) and also not good as a protagonist since he's always reacting to the plot
And in the novel the heroines are slowly being taken away by other players and game MC (Yuuma)
Spoil who gets taken. At this point I don't feel sorry for the MC, he's made his bed and he should lie in it. I'm still also pissed off the butao still exists. Like fuck off will you, your time is done.
 
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Not really, it's mostly her fault because in the novel she's aware of his feelings for her
The reason she did not do anything about that situation is because of the magical marriage contract
I'm not sure if it was mentioned in this manga that she was aware of his feelings, but yes, she did thought the contract was real.
 
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Well, thats it for now? Gonna miss the nice legs, gotta hand it to the mangaka. :thumbsup:
Duality of men. I myself hate how this dude draws legs. Most of the time they are drawn with enormous calves bigger than thighs and its borderlining on being ugly in my eyes. Like a bunch of mutants or something ;)

Still better this than that manga with ugly as fuck fetish nipples.
 
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thank you for translating! i like this manga, the MC and everything build up in it is my cup of tea, even the frustrating part (about nobility, class, organization, politics, etc) is very close to the real world for me, and the world-ending disaster too, but this manga shows there is still hope, and that's what's important.
and YOOOOO THAT LAST 2 PAGES IS A HUGE DROP
 

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