@vexelpops well there's some confusion on the scenes transition, but I do like the story
for the FL, I don't see that she just fall for every man, maybe her easy blushing gave that impression, I'd say that she's actually pretty innocent and have no experience with men, that's maybe why it's quite surprising to her to be very close to them. I think more than being easy, she's actually quite closed up after her bad experience with that Delin
but for the ML, yeah he's bushy but I don't see it over the top, it's quite cute, especially effective for the FL tough guard
I'm not trying to attack you or anything, it was very interesting that we have very different opinions ᕕ( ◔3◔)ᕗ