When I Returned to My Hometown, My Childhood Friend was Broken - Ch. 19

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We'll find out eventually. It's bad storytelling to just dump someone's lifestory and in real life you just look like a crazy person.
I can’t explain how much I like this comment. Same with some novels I’ve read, just awkward conversations and infodumps, instead of letting a story breathe and happen naturally.
 

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