When I Returned to My Hometown, My Childhood Friend was Broken - Ch. 23 - Ch. 23

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There are many other series out there that have been dropped and left untranslated for months or even years and yet they chose one that already has people working on it
 
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There are many other series out there that have been dropped and left untranslated for months or even years and yet they chose one that already has people working on it
Guys we didn’t intend to snipe it, this was our first chapter so we had to wait for the mods to approve. Was not planning on picking this up as someone is already doing it this was just for fun. pls
 
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Guys we didn’t intend to snipe it, this was our first chapter so we had to wait for the mods to approve. Was not planning on picking this up as someone is already doing it this was just for fun. pls
We like fun things
 
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I'm gonna ignore snipe/no-snipe shenanigans and say that compared to the other translation, the conversation feels a bit stiff in spots. These two are supposed to be close friends, lovers even, but the translation here feels a bit too formal, while the other feels more casual. Grammatically, its a bit off; its a passable job, but losing that close-friendly nuance kinda hurts the translation.
 
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Stiff. Could definitely use some PR work to smooth out the dialogue/conversations.

Also, TS is neither bad nor good. It feels messy at some parts, with letters or punctuations touching on the speech bubble edges.
 
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I hope whatever happened to her is related to over working instead of prostitution
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I hope whatever happened to her is related to over working instead of prostitution
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It was mostly spelled out already that she wasn’t in the adult entertainment business (despite her looks), she just failed to kickstart her life and became a shut in
 
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It was mostly spelled out already that she wasn’t in the adult entertainment business (despite her looks), she just failed to kickstart her life and became a shut in
OH THANK GOD SHE JUST BECAME A NEET 😭
 
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Stiff. Could definitely use some PR work to smooth out the dialogue/conversations.

Also, TS is neither bad nor good. It feels messy at some parts, with letters or punctuations touching on the speech bubble edges.
yes, I didn't like TS here too. Inconsistent line spacing. Distance to bubble edges. The font is hard to read
 

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