Who Saw the Peacock Dance in the Jungle? - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Dad and Ramen

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I’ve had this on my list for so long!!! Great first chapter thank you for your hard work Connurr ❤️
 
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Omg what a great first chapter. I'm a sucker for crime mystery shit. The title tho. It's very intriguing. It's based on a proverb and basically means something beautiful (the peacock dance) has no value if no one sees it (in the forest). How does it relate to the story? Definitely connect to the rich family killed and their 6 months old daughter. Sensing some corruption aspect as well especially with the aunty ominous vibe and the 3 million yen. In short, I'm hard as fuck to see this unveiled
 
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How did 6 people not overpower a single guy... did he have a gun? How did a Japanese guy with debt get a gun there?
 
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Not the violence on Valentine chocolate! That was a really cute way to not make Komugi cry while reading the letter.
Strong first chapter! Looking forward to how it'll progress.
 

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