With that Forbidden Girl in a Forbidden Place - Ch. 1

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New gyaru yuri from the artist of her kiss and philia, seems interesting. I hope someone from /u/ scanlations picks it up or maybe yuri-project. Also you got the artist/author name backwards
 
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Interesting chapter, is there more?

Thank you for the effort and for bringing this manga to our attention, despite having some errors in the translation I think it is still understandable. Could yoy give us a link to the original spanish translation?
 
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Thank you for translating, although I would recommend that you get a native English speaker to proofread and edit so the final product is actually readable.
 
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Oh my god Cute!! i do have to say the english is not well put but this is a lovely series would love to read more
 
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@flut

I was going to suggest the same, while I appreciate the translation to beginn with. The choppy English makes following the dialogue a bit hard. And rather than concentrating on using different fonts, prioritize the spell checking. Kasumi/Kusumi things like that can easily be avoided.

Still, I that first chapter has drawn me into the story
 
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been seeing the spanish raw for quite some time now...
really interested to read it in English translation since the story seems interesting...
thank you so much for pickin this up
 
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Hello, I apoligize if I come as a bit rude but the translation was a bit rough to read in english. Usually I wouldn't do this but since this grabbed me I can help translate, I'm an spanish native speaker but my english is pretty alright too, if i'm allowed to say so myself. (Not bragging or anything but if you want specifics I'm at B2 level and aiming to certificate myself on C2 in a fee years)

In any case, thanks for picking this up, and as I mentioned above, if you feel like you need some help I'm more than willing to try.
 

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