World of Lysos: Moro the Immortal - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Moro's Lysos

[MangaDex]

 

[Parnifia]

That last page is a textbook example of how not to write dialogue. You can't just throw walls of... Whatever that dialogue is, at the reader and expect them to care. Find a way to shorten it or spread it out further.

 

[Staryoshi]

That last page is a textbook example of how not to write dialogue. You can't just throw walls of... Whatever that dialogue is, at the reader and expect them to care. Find a way to shorten it or spread it out further.

Yeah, I realized how bad it was after writing it. I'll make sure to be more mindful to the amount of text on one page in the future.