World Teacher – Other World Style Education & Agent - Ch. 63

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This is honestly very, very, very good for a simple MTL; the proofreading is just that excellent. The only critiques I can validly offer is that there seem to be some errors/typos/inconsistencies ("mirak" on one page, "mila" on another, "mira-ism" sometimes but other times "miraism", as examples) and that the honorifics and some words' untranslated variants were stripped away (probably not your fault but the MTL's); for instance, one page has "sis" instead of the less localized onee-san/chan and all places where a -san or something would be expected don't have one (yet for some reaso "aniki" is untranslated, lol).
 
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This is honestly very, very, very good for a simple MTL; the proofreading is just that excellent. The only critiques I can validly offer is that there seem to be some errors/typos/inconsistencies ("mirak" on one page, "mila" on another, "mira-ism" sometimes but other times "miraism", as examples) and that the honorifics and some words' untranslated variants were stripped away (probably not your fault but the MTL's); for instance, one page has "sis" instead of the less localized onee-san/chan and all places where a -san or something would be expected don't have one (yet for some reaso "aniki" is untranslated, lol).
I am not a fan of over using “onee-chan/san” so I just use sister or sis, I leave “aniki” in because the whole gimmick has been there since the beginning and it feels wrong changing it.

Also I ended TL and TS late at night and was extremely tired after uni classes so I may have glossed over some things like that, but as I said, I will fixe them tomorrow, for now I will just go to sleep since I have to work in the morning :haa:
 
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Yes, I noticed after uploading, I will have them corrected tomorrow.
Thank you - I know other groups which use MTL and don't even bother to revise their misses, so I commend you for taking the move to improve your work 😊
 
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Judging from the new cover, why does it feels like the Flame Fox and The Saintess will be part of Reus Love Life
 
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I don't know what the actual term they used in Japanese but I think using "faith" instead of "cult" would sound better. The word "cult" is used more as a illegitimate or evil religion and "faith" the opposite.
 
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Must've not updated yet, since I still see the typos and grammatical inconsistencies.
 
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The giant fire spirit arrives extremely conveniently. After it has burned the city down, everybody, the poor, the (formerly) rich, the clergy, will start from nothing to rebuild their lives and society. Under such circumstances, their faith will serve them well. It will also be the real faith, not the archbishop's fill-your-pockets faith, because there will be nothing left to fill pockets with. You might call this a divine tribulation, after they had perverted Miraism.

Of course if Steven Seagal, pardon me, Sirius actually stops the fire spirit and the town is saved, it's all meaningless. In that case the whole town will probably just welcome Ashley back through some bullshit writing.
 

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