XENOBEAST

[MangaDex]

 

[AncelDeLambert]

This has potential
Needs an editor to help out, but there's definitely a good series in here.

 

[Plykiya]

@RizkyArrydesta Your art is extremely cute. Love the girls and the animals

 

[SirAelan]

this oneshot was pretty good imo

 

[Ovnidemon]

I also think it's quite good. Just need a bit of polishing.

 

[Darcow]

Art - 10/10
Story - 7/10 because it’s a oneshot.
Concept - 6/10 again, because it’s a oneshot

Potential is there. I would suggest to continue to flesh out the story and characters. I would love to read more from the author.

Overall: 8 keep it up!

 

[Tekikato]

The concept is great, wish this wasn't a oneshot so you could tell more about the races, the characters backstory, and the world itself